Tuesday, December 13, 2005

small silver poem-fish

some old poetry, cause, hey, what else am i going to do with it? (yay bloggie spacing!!!!!!)

    eyes stray avoiding crush contact
         teeth constant grinning
         and when you say my name
         i jolt
               out of

                                  (or is it Io?)
         Jupiter moons alighting
                    hydrogen tunes
                                 i could fade in that smile
         i’ll catch a ride with you
         one day
                   and i’ll—
         say nothing
         do nothing
                       wading daisies in my
                                            sundress sonata
         what will you do?

5 little fish:

Blogger jason evans swam up to say...

That's a powerful and skillful depiction of a crush, Mysfit. Makes me kind of nostalgic. Nice work!

10:39 PM  
Blogger jenn see swam up to say...

i love how i can see your face sometimes as though you're speaking the poem i'm reading.

11:28 PM  
Blogger JP swam up to say...

Lime and limpid green, a second scene...

(I had a brief Barrett moment)

11:44 PM  
Blogger jenn see swam up to say...

wow, is that an interstellar overdrive? sweet...

12:18 AM  
Blogger transience swam up to say...

ditto on jenn see's comment. sweet, indeed.

4:29 AM  

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